The Colors of my Love

  May 22 2007  | Views 1297 |  Comments  (21)
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  Saaya posted 1 year ago

witchonthebroom,
Thanks.
Srinath,
Thanks.



  srinath girish posted 1 year ago

Liked it, Saaya...had never thought of emotions in terms of colour before.
Regards,
Girish



  witchonthebroom posted 1 year ago

 Lovely Poem, Love is a rainbow, it shows you all the colors and ofcourse the stars and the moons too!!!



  Saaya posted 1 year ago

my utterances,
Thanks a lot :)
 
Jisa,
Thank you.
 
candymandotcom,
Thank you.
 
Komal,
Thank you.
 
Balaji,
Thanks. Yeah, the title is a bit Cliché.
But apt one for my poem, so.
 
Pradeep24s,
Thank you.
 
Harsha,
funny..Thanks for commenting.
 
Shamoli,
Thanks a lot.
Rainbow & Question mark, Thats a nice touch.



  Shamoli Sarkar posted 1 year ago

"Wonder sometimes, what color will pop up

when i see you again.."
 
Mind blowing!
This is a great poem..



  harshalawyer posted 1 year ago

"Wonder sometimes, what color will pop up

when i see you again.."
 
You have expressed some moods for each color and made it special in its own way.
No one color is inferior to the other.
But you have suddenly placed the colors in an unhealthy competition.
No one color can emerge victorious when you see him again.
It will be a great injustice to the rest of the colors.
 
There is only one solution possible to save the colors!!
 
Just dont see him again!!
 
Harsha



  pradeep24s posted 1 year ago

Great writing and truly love is colorful :)



  M.V. Balaji posted 1 year ago

Thank god it was a poem!A short story with this title would have sounded very Mills and Boonish. A colourful poem to say the least!



  Komal thakur posted 1 year ago

A very through representations of diff phases of a relationship. Luved ur poem
specially wen u said "that al d colors were mixed up beyond our imagination." i hv a certain perception of this line......its d best one...



  candymandotcom posted 1 year ago

Hi Saaya ...kiska saaya ?
 
nice post lady !
The color of luv is red I believe
White is meant for peace n tranquility
 
 





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